ive decided to write only on here

[theundergrad]

3:06am sunday:

Just finished.
Settled now,

Waiting for Dream
Chased by Sleep
f**k You
f**k Adbusters,

Got no message
Nor no speak
Just plain carnage
Just plain Meak
Listen to something?
No don't listen to me!

THE POEM:

HAHA
we own it now,
We expand it now
Live in trees and far off the green
No golf No MILF
f**k f**k, f**k it all!

Wait wait, did I express?
Shouldn't have,
Should have suppressed
I know that they
Want me Depressed
Thats why I don't
Get down on myself

Stand up a bit
Stand up for it
The bare leaves
I won't leave
Stay with them
As long as they
Keep on the trees

Ill be a fallen fellow
f**k all those out of mellow
The war has just begun
Its against us a
and those who haven't sung

The poet versus soldier who will win?
I know it,
its the man who has seen his sin.

The poet lies in deep darkness
The soldier walks in extreme excess
Why not let the man who knows do the speaking
Even if he decides to do it in keeping
To the silent code he kept
Despite your gold money infinite

Reak havoc in all your time
Reak havoc on their divine
Money, gold, power its the same
Nietzsche, Washington, their to blame
f**k the superman in his cradle
I won't rise above anyone able

Ill stay back admist the clovers,
Four leafed and lucky is my number
Six in the basket and seven in your hand
You look desperate
like you can't find magic man

Ill stop I'll stop, no go no further,
It's better than top, no top,
I won't reach no further,
I don't want no happy success story
Give me the grass for company.

[theundergrad]

f**k i put it in prose! O well be d**ned it sucks anyways. Someone rip it up!

[Ty]

Hey thundergrad -

You need to relax a little bit. Writing isn't something that can be forced. I don't know too many people who can say I want to write so I am going to write. It has to come to you. Plus read ALOT. I've found throughout my writing career that by reading other authors, and by authors I mean anyone who writes, does't have to be published, you learn a lot. Take it easy, and always be constructive. And please use proper grammar when writing replies, it's good practice and it will help other people in taking you seriously. Your writing is great, but you need to really relax.

Ty